Again the speck opened its eye
A vision flickered stuttered as though it would fade
but steadied itself in a vague way
The eye was now open and it did not blink
Sight was not yet born for light did not move.
Yet eye gazed
The eye gazed while the void expanded
The eye gazed while darkness handicapped vision
Then it blinked but for a brief second
With that blink, another speck opened its eye
The gaze grew fiercer.
The eyes blinked again
and again another eye was opened
Thus the void awakened
and the mind of the unborn artist lay with its infinite eyes open
A vision flickered stuttered as though it would fade
but steadied itself in a vague way
The eye was now open and it did not blink
Sight was not yet born for light did not move.
Yet eye gazed
The eye gazed while the void expanded
The eye gazed while darkness handicapped vision
Then it blinked but for a brief second
With that blink, another speck opened its eye
The gaze grew fiercer.
The eyes blinked again
and again another eye was opened
Thus the void awakened
and the mind of the unborn artist lay with its infinite eyes open
10 Comments:
is it over? or is there more to come? if so, what is the funda of writing things in parts?
it seems you have not advertised ur blog this time as much as earlier...
Reminds me of the 'eye' in the Lord of the Rings.. :)..Great visualisation....
PB
@Ram - Not yet over pa...it is a looooooooong one. In fact, I have already written about 15 pages on paper...too lazy to post them. And these 15 pages don't even complete the prelude!!! As far as publicity goes, I have informed all my previous regular readers. Haven't tried for new readers yet!!
@PB - Hmm... Lord of the rings, not what I had in mind, but an interesting parallel.
and it is the making of a genius
lazy like me to put up on posthumus
thought
looks like you are attempting an epic poem...like a modern vyasa...lol
@Thought - Nice to see you buddy. Will read through your BLOG.
@Ram - Hmm... you can think of something on that lines. Although Vyasa is too much of a claim!!
put up your now post yaar..... am eagerly looking forward to it.
Give me some more time Thought....tied up a bit now...
my dear fellow, it looks like someone's been reading a lot of...savitri? :)
@Anonymous - Savitri, perhaps...actually I'm reading a lot of Soundarylahari now!! Would you also have the kindness to introduce yourself?
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